First female character attempt

FruitBomb

Hey guys this is my first female character im trying.
Im starting on the head.
here is my ref and my screenshot
What do you guys think?


I started from a cube instead of a sphere.
I was going to use a geosphere but it didnt seem practical.

Stinger88

nice start. I think you need a little more definition around the eye and nose....and lips...and maybe the arms could do with a bit more length. Legs are a bit thin as well.

Oh, and you forgot the cape.

passerby

needs moar cowbell

Snader

I think you need to optimize a bit. It says you're using 5633 triangles, while this model can be with just 192 tris.

sltrOlsson

Soooooo, are you actually going to this or are you just trolling? (Sorry for being an arse, but I actually wonder)

mr_ace

you've really captured her silhouette beautifully

SnaFuBAR

this is a well rounded character.

Kot_Leopold

Not much of a start here, really. If I were you, I wouldn't even bother posting a screenshot at such an early stage.

StevenEgan

You have to do a tut!

garriola83

kinda unusual to post a sphere and call it a character. i agree with kot_leopold, post something not so early. i always look forward to other character artists wok on here.

ps. you have 3K polys while im seeing 64 polys + the plane

dinfet

this thread is a classic, I'm laughing over here!

achillesian

garriola83 wrote: »

ps. you have 3K polys while im seeing 64 polys + the plane

Model was made with invisible ink. :poly142: SO PRO.

eazy

SnaFuBAR wrote: »

this is a well rounded character.

lol'd. trolling the troll = classy. but this is all in good fun, riiight? is anyone who's taking this thread seriously?

JR

garriola83 wrote: »

ps. you have 3K polys while im seeing 64 polys + the plane

It's a magical model. It's invisible to anyone who was not fit for the gaming industry, or who is unpardonably stupid.

I'd say lovely start, FruitBomb! Just pay attention at her cape, the way you are doing it's too simetrical and unrealistic. Exagerate a bit more on that left folders, and you´re on the right track! :P

Seirei

Judging the polycound you may want to 'unhide' all objects related to the character before posting it. I have the feeling somethings missing here!

almighty_gir

needs bigger shoulderpads man.

OrganizedChaos

FruitBomb wrote: »

I started from a cube instead of a sphere.

Woah! You've made some awesome progress!

FruitBomb

So heres an update but
I am deathly afraid of SOPA so sorry for the crappy update J.J

Seirei

Nice foot! Though it lacks some detail.