Realistic bust - first try wip

Shaper · Jul 2011

Hey guys, learning character art, so here is my first go at a realistic head (wip) Crits welcome!

MrHobo · Jul 2011

I think you're off to a good start, but you might want to examine the ears again. Right now something just aint sitting right. I think they might be too far back on the skull. Also the jaw feels like it might be jutting out a bit too much. Maybe a a side shot would help clarify things more.

Shaper · Jul 2011

sideshot with no distortion:

DrunkShaman · Jul 2011

Shaper wrote: »

sideshot with no distortion:

The back of the head is too flat, round it up a littleby pushing it back and defining the end of the neck.

Ears are missing the front portions, and they are too small. Try resizing them and bringing them a bit forth, and ofcourse make the front portion of the ear.

Shaper · Jul 2011

Nitewalkr wrote: »

The back of the head is too flat, round it up a littleby pushing it back and defining the end of the neck.

Ears are missing the front portions, and they are too small. Try resizing them and bringing them a bit forth, and ofcourse make the front portion of the ear.

could you draw some lines so i would know just about how much, and what you mean by the front portions?

Shaper · Jul 2011

did some tweaking and changes in proportion, better now?

innervision961 · Jul 2011

Check your sternomastoid, it should connect pretty close to the ear and it looks like you have if going under the jaw. Great start way better than mine!

Shaper · Jul 2011

It seems youre right, have to fix that...

I also made a skeleton a few weeks ago, so ill dump it here...

Realistic bust - first try wip

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