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Currently I'm still adding and fixing work on my portfolio website and wanted to get some critiques from fellow Polycounters.

here is the link to my website: www.shawnell3d.com
Thanks in advanced! :)
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  • MM
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    MM polycounter lvl 17
    shawnell3d wrote: »
    Currently I'm still adding and fixing work on my portfolio website and wanted to get some critiques from fellow Polycounters.

    here is the link to my website: www.shawnell3d.com

    Thanks in advanced! :)


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    shawnell3d
    thanks for the help
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  • Cody
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    Cody polycounter lvl 15
    You have some pretty good work. Your hard surface metal stuff is great. Your concrete assets however are not. It looks like it was done by a different person. Especially in the gate crasher env, that barrier is muddy and WAY to shiny. It's like it melted or something. Spend a bit of time and rework the concrete stuff, look at some reference, and keep working. Maybe try a scene with some more organic elements, to round out your portfolio, rocks trees, some natural stuff. Pretty nice portfolio overall.
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    shawnell3d
    thanks Cody i have noticed that my organic stuff needs improvement and that was my next area of focus and i also thought about creating an organic environment as well. thanks for the feed back! :)
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