Portfolio Update and Critique

shawnell3d

Currently I'm still adding and fixing work on my portfolio website and wanted to get some critiques from fellow Polycounters.

here is the link to my website: www.shawnell3d.com
Thanks in advanced!

MM

shawnell3d wrote: »

Currently I'm still adding and fixing work on my portfolio website and wanted to get some critiques from fellow Polycounters.

here is the link to my website: www.shawnell3d.com

Thanks in advanced!

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shawnell3d

thanks for the help

Cody

You have some pretty good work. Your hard surface metal stuff is great. Your concrete assets however are not. It looks like it was done by a different person. Especially in the gate crasher env, that barrier is muddy and WAY to shiny. It's like it melted or something. Spend a bit of time and rework the concrete stuff, look at some reference, and keep working. Maybe try a scene with some more organic elements, to round out your portfolio, rocks trees, some natural stuff. Pretty nice portfolio overall.

shawnell3d

thanks Cody i have noticed that my organic stuff needs improvement and that was my next area of focus and i also thought about creating an organic environment as well. thanks for the feed back!