Ferrograph_Recorder

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  Next polycounter lvl 12

  Dec 2010

  hi
  
  i think it looks solid and is a good start so far.
  But try to stick closer to your reference ( which is btw awesome) some parts look a bit rushed right now especially the top piece where the tape runs through, but im guessing it's not finished yet
  and next time turn on perspective for your screenshots so there is some feel for the proportions.
  else it is nice
  
  cheers

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  Snader polycounter lvl 17

  Dec 2010

  Many of the elements are too small: cornerbumperthings, dials, safetyclasps, tapespools have too narrow edges etc.

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  Oniram polycounter lvl 18

  Dec 2010

  take shots in perspective.. orthographic just makes things not look right. its looking good so far. you may want to pay more attention to scale and placement to certain things as they seem to be slightly off from the reference.

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  bowplane

  Dec 2010

  thank you, I will adjust

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