WIP Soldier - Guerilla

rihotzu · Sep 2009

Hi guys, this was my last week project is inspired in Red Faction Guerrilla.
Hope like it.

-Still WIP-
The Idea is make a realtime version for UE3

Used: XSI-ZBrush

brandoom · Sep 2009

Not bad Rihotzu! Its looking pretty sweet so far.

My only crits are the face. The proportions look a bit off to me. The nose and mouth are a little narrow in comparison. And i think the check bones could be defined a little more. Heres some reference that may help.

The only other thing is I think the back of the armor is a little boring when compared to the front/chest. Maybe add in some similar details around the kidneys for example.

Keep up the good work

rihotzu · Sep 2009

hey Brandoom thanks for the reference, yes I guess the same, Why so Serious? let's put a Smile in that armor hahahah.

Celes · Sep 2009

The face... depends on what style you are going for. It's good for an anime-influenced look.
knees look a bit low tho

malcolm · Sep 2009

That is some crazy moose knucle.

Taylor Hood · Sep 2009

Pretty awesome but the knees look like they are being pushed down by the armor plate above : O

rihotzu · Sep 2009

hello guys thanks for critics

here is some wireframes and 360 version.

Version 360: Click and drag

PeterK · Sep 2009

For some reason (mostly the head), I am getting a serious "Fist of the Northstar" vibde from this.

praxedes · Sep 2009

This wireframe is for the hi poly right? Cos it's no realtime mesh! I really like what you've done with the various fabric folds- they're coming out nicely. I actually like the rear armour design (more than the front) and just think that an interesting diffuse and spec pattern will pop it out well.

The only thing I don't buy are the veins on the arms and neck, which look random and not integrated, and the slash/scar across the centre bridge of the nose- it looks too deep to be anything but a gaping wound- scar tissue would surely have filled in that gash?

Other than that, nice work!

~P~

d00kie · Sep 2009

Nice model, but the design of the character in itself makes me go "???"
He has what seems to be a knife from a fantasy genre, but he's in some kind of futureland wartorn enviroment armor with spiky shin gauntlets, and a backwards baseball cap.
Well, now that I think of it, Mad Max was kinda "???" to me with thier football shoulder pads for everything. Sorry for the rant.

Nice model, weak character design imo.

boyluya · Sep 2009

I disagree with d00kie. I don't think the character design is weak.

And about the knees, yeah they're too low. You should adjust those.

achillesian · Sep 2009

boyluya wrote: »

I disagree with d00kie. I don't think the character design is weak.

And about the knees, yeah they're too low. You should adjust those.

heres something to illustrate the main anatomical problem, the knees,

and, I will be on the "this has weak design" team if we play kickball

but this is also fanart-ish so design isnt really the question here.

WIP Soldier - Guerilla

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