[WIP] Low Poly Tactical Shotgun for "Slaughter House" project.

ZenDavis

Hey guys. This is a low-poly tactical shotgun for our "Slaughter House" game we're working on. The game is aimed at the iOS (iPhone / iPad) platform and we're hoping if you guys could look over and give any constructive feedback.

The model is 770 Verts and 672 polys and was done by one of our weapons artists, Robeomega. The shotgun concept and logo were designed by our amazing concept artist Noah. We strive to get better so seriously, we're open to all constructive criticism.

Paul Pepera

That bloody smiley face logo is from The Watchmen. You should probably remove it or you risk getting into some legal trouble.

ZenDavis

Considering it's on the corner of the concept and not on the actual weapon itself I doubt we'll be getting cease and desist letters anytime soon. It was placed there for our own amusement as we moved forward on the project.

Cheathem

Your gun is looking very flat at the moment,almost as if you made a silhouette and extruded it.

work on making it more soft,your handle for instance looks like it would really be uncomfortable to hold because of how sharp it is.

D.Carmine

Cheathem wrote: »

Your gun is looking very flat at the moment,almost as if you made a silhouette and extruded it.

I completely agree with this. Your block out reads very square. I think once you fix that you'll be right on track.

- D. Carmine

ZenDavis

Thanks for the feedback guys. Much obliged.

Harry asked me to post these additional perspectives in order to get additional feedback. He is new at working with us but was really quite hoping to work with us. I'm giving him a shot by posting this attempt and seeing how you guys take to it.

Cheathem

Same advice as before,make it less blocky and i think you'll be good to go.