Dylan and LRoys Chickfight

Dylan Brady

Me n Mike decided to post our ladies up for public humiliation in the name of good clean fun! now lets have a fair fight, no hair pull- ohh screw it just go!



Lineage II female Mage in Dark Crystal Robes:
REFFSHEET
http://dylan-brady.com/publicimages/lineageIIMagereffsheet.jpg

Front Ortho sketch:

Progress:

LRoy

doing ken from zone of the enders 2. long way to go to not look terrible. gonna try to do as much as i can before the bootcamp.

blocking everything out. if anyone has any crit i'd really appreciate it.

Tits

Really nice starr! I think it looks realy nice, tho at first i did really understood and tough she was naked on the crotch area!
when you will finish blocking I think you should fix that (but of course with texture it would had been different)

disanski

Awesome start guys.
Dylan very nice concept. I think the forearm is either too long or the biceps area is too short but from the shots you posted I can't be sure.
LRoy those are awesome proportions only think I think needs some attention is the Hands- perhaps they are a bit too small

Funky Bunnies

strong start you guys! this should be awesome

daphz

cool stuff guys! Dylan I'd thicken up her arms and legs a bit and Lroy nice star man, her hands are lookin a bit small though

Dylan Brady

thanks a bunch Tits Dis and Denis, And TTANKS for the badass paintover Chris:
Pimpage: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/21024888/sharestuff/dylan_womanatomy.gif

Deffinately have to thicken up the arms more forsure like you said Deny but I, done for today so ill post the progress.

Steve Schulze

Looks like you've lost some of the voluptuous form that made the concept interesting, Dylan. You need to make the forms a bit more extreme all round.

Dylan Brady

this had been but mostly on the backburner, but Ive been coming back to it every once in a while and tweaking stuff.
dropped the clothing for now to work on the anatomy

JR

She's looking really hot by now.

disanski

Hey nice work guys.
Dylan that looks awesome so far man. there are few things i noticed and it could be all just in my head and I am also still learning too so don't take it too serious :
- the ribcage does not look very accurate to me. It looks too wide at its bottom for me. I try to draw on top of your image - green is what you have and red is what i was thinking of - so kind of just bring it in a bit forwards the center of the abs. That sticking out part should be just at the border with the abs usually.
- the angle of the scapula coming down her back looks a bit too extreme so with red is what i think it should be.
- space between the Posterior Superior Iliac Spine and the gluteal fold is a little too much but it looks like you are doing this on purpose and it probably does look better that way, I just wanted to point it out.

I think that is about it. Keep it up guys.

Dylan Brady

Thanks a bunch Dis, i missed your post until now but im gonna deffinately hit those changes up. good points.
mostly all Hard-Surface clothes