Portfolio - Vio

Vio

http://philipjames1986.carbonmade.com/

In much need of crits for my portfolio since I'm finished at uni now.
Thanks very much everyone.

dii

Would highly suggest reading these:

http://www.noahbradley.com/blog/2011/i-hate-your-portfolio/
http://www.thejonjones.com/2005/10/07/your-portfolio-repels-jobs/

Some specific problems:

Can't save images
Can't enlarge images
Your contact info isn't on any of your images, your name isn't even on most of them
Navigation requires too much clicking
Way too many images in general, 8 pictures of the same gun is a bit excessive
Unless you want to be a concept artist I'd suggest removing the 2D work

respawnrt

I'm pretty sure 8 images of the same model are cool.Let's look at one of my favorite portfolio regarding guns Of course the other points still stand dii.
http://www.lonewolf3d.com/images/Mp5/MP5RAS.html

mr_ace

I'd agree with dii, and also add some of my own:

- Run your 'about' section through a spellcheck, theres a few mistakes in there

- Your presentation could do with improvements, it's quite erratic in places (for the Kriss gun, some shotsa have a black background, others white, others with a gradient) and lacking in others (Again with the kriss, the lighting for the main presentation shots is very flat and looks just like max's default lighting)

- I would revert your pages back to just being normal pages with all your pictures to just scroll through. Nobody likes flash image viewers, and as dii mentions you can't save your pics which is problematic

Vio

Thanks very much for the feedback, so many good points.