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  • Ace-Angel
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    Ace-Angel polycounter lvl 12
    Size of hip vs. her buttocks look awkward and really flat, she should atleast have a nice curve to her buttocks, especially with that armor ontop of it, just like her breasts should.

    Also, many body parts on her don't seem to take into account 'bulk', they look (again) kinda compressed and flat, almost as if the armor is paper thin. This problem is more pronounced in the lower regions vs. her upper regions, which seem to have taken bulk into account.

    So yeah, more work on her lower plox.
  • Add3r
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    Add3r polycounter lvl 11
    Yeah she needs a more pronounced back end area, the anatomy as a whole is getting there, I think you have the hard surface down, now it comes down to getting it "feeling" right. As Ace said, if you make her butt a little more pronounced to keep that flow and arch that females normally have, I think it will really make this an outstanding piece. Its coming along pretty nicely though man! As for the upper chest area (her breast-eses), I feel that not every female has DDs if you know what I mean. Its a complete stereotype obviously, and if you were trying to break that, I am all for it man. I personally like the way the upper body is coming along, with a little more work making her a little more curvy, this could definitely come out pretty nicely in the end! But yeah, one thing to keep in mind is the fact that females (this is NOT a stereotype lol) on average have curvier hips as females normally have the "baby makin'" pelvis, thus pushing their hips out, creating that natural curve. I think you have that curve coming from the upper body and riding down to the sides of her hips, but as I said above, if you followed through with that around to the back end and pushed the butt out, it will make this piece feel like it flows. Good job so far man! Just gotta take into account she has armor on, that's all! I am definitely following the progress on this one!
  • Havoc89
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    Havoc89 polycounter lvl 11
    Looking good so far. Nice and clean.
  • DannSw
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    DannSw polycounter lvl 10
  • r_fletch_r
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    r_fletch_r polycounter lvl 9
    looking really nice. could do with some broader bevels on the plating. all those hard edges wont show too well in a bake.

    incase you need face reference:
    FemShep.jpg
  • SA_22
    haha!! :D

    really nice start!.. agree with what everyone has said but you seem to be on top of that so awesome!!
  • achillesian
    i won't sleep tonight fletch
  • DannSw
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    DannSw polycounter lvl 10
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  • chud1981
    Hi - just wondering if you have an update on your work on this. This is the first attempt to create Shepard's armor in 3d and Id love to see it completed.
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