Male Body (WIP)

aston91

Hi everyone, sorry i haven't posted in a while just being doing other modules and caught up in a lot of work for university. Below is my near completed model, im trying to look for texture faults i can fix in Photoshop. An extra eye and critique of my final piece would be appreciated. thank you. (the face isn't marked so that why there isn't much detail)

















Maps

Ambient is included in the diffuse

16bit

Can we see some wires? His calf looks very pointy.

aston91

Yeah sure

16bit

His calfs are very pointy, you should think about adding more geometry to make it more smooth.

KidNamedAnt

Hey aston91, yeah like 16bit said, the calf's are a little bit too pointy, apart from that it's looking good. The hairs on the arms and legs look rate good!

Parralax

Hi, looking nice but the forehead is way too small and there is much more detail in the body than the face. Work on adding more to detail to the head and hair.

Quack!

My first observation was that this man has no penis.

Jonathan Dick

Try looking at a nude male model for reference and pay attention to the silhouette, he looks a little like amorphous the way it is right now.

aston91

Thanks for the feedback i have added more detail to the head and hair and added geometry around my leg so give it a smoother outcome

amingtonspitfires

Aston91, Looks nice! Also nice and clean edge flow! Keep up the good work!