You have some lovely work, and rather than point at individual pieces, I'd say you could change the order of some of the work. It starts with high quality modelling, but really loses pace quickly..I think too much emphasis was placed on the bike and the breakdowns. I really like them, but think you could make it a little snappier.
Some very nice work in there though, well done
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Some very nice work in there though, well done
Monkeyboy, you have a point! I think I'll rearrange the pieces and crank up the speed a bit.
Thanks everyone!
turn-arounds could be cut by 1/2 of their runtime however
great stuff
I shortened the turntables and now I'm down to 2:01 instead of 2:32 which feels much better.