Payphone (finished game asset)

woody

Been working on this for a few weeks on and off. This is my first model since I got my new computer, which makes life so much easier especially creating the high poly model with lots of detail.

Anyway...



And a little quick process breakdown I made to show the stages:



Texture ref:


Let me know what you think.

Cheers, Woody.

Clark Coots

cool nice job. UVs are packed nicely is that your design as well?

jordan.kocon

Really nice work, the main thing I can see is that your phone cord is quite short.

Darkleopard

nice asset. Only thing that stands out to be comparing with the concept is that the sides where the read is are a different shape/size. I dont think that really matters though :P

Ra6ga5ka

nice jop and really close to the reference..

Jet_Pilot

Looks sweet, but yeah i agree with Jordan... the phone cord is pretty short and i feel if the texture of the cord was more of the bright brushed metal it would pop a more.

jeremiah_bigley

Aside from everything else mentioned, all of your metal is looking more like concrete than metal. You put too much variation and noise in your diffuse and it starts looking like concrete. I would suggest pulling about 90 to 80% of that variation out and leave it up to your specular to get it looking right.

Other than that... nice work man!

Jet_Pilot

I would also add your texture sizes to your asset presentation image, and remove what programs you used.

woody

@coots7: Kinda mix of different references, tweaked and played with.

@jordan.kokon: Yeah think I got that wrapped up in making the high poly cord that I forgot to consider the length! Silly mistake. But yeah it may not be a realistic length but it is still practical and would still work if you were to imagine using it.

@Darkleopard: Yes this was a design choice, the ref was more of a texture reference.

@jeremiah_bigley: You are right. I find it hard to stop myself from overworking the diffuse while working on it for long periods. Now I have had a while away from the asset I can definitely see where your coming from. I suppose less is more which is a hard thing to grasp when working your diffuse and specular at different stages, need to get into the habbit of creating both at the same time!

@Jet_Pilot: Yup, knew I'd missed something. haha.