FirstEnvironment + Gun

TopGuppy

So, just like it says, I have nearly completed my first environment/gun and LORD KNOWS I need help. So here goes first forum post!

TopGuppy

Oh, and the gun has geometry inside itself because the pieces are able to come apart. I realize it could be optimized a lot as well, something I'll do in the future.

maxivz

I am not an expert of any kind in 3d and i really suck at textures, but i think that weapon has too much dust and rust on it
I lik the envio, but i think the proportions are a bit off, walls and pillars are taller in the concept

TopGuppy

You're right, I think I could take it back a bit pretty easily on the "battle damage" hahaha. and I definitely see what you're saying about the proportions being off with the walls/pillars. thanks! ALL crits/feedback are welcome!

SPYFF

CZ Scorpion? Little overscratshed, but the model looks good. If you have a time, create highpoly and bake AO and normal map (the normal/ao generators no create good reason).

lbigbirdl

i think the bases of the pillars should have a lot of damage and cracks and such because pillars like that dont just lean right over. also the holo sight seems a bit long