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[WIP] The Widowmaker

The Lone Penguin
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Made this based off of a concept from Deus Ex. Triangle count sits at 5,092. Just starting to texture now so it's mostly base color

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  • SPYFF
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    SPYFF polycounter lvl 10
    Nice remake! The weapon texture looks very realistic and clean. The weapon choose is perfect, looks like UTS15 or Keltek KSG.
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  • sltrOlsson
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    sltrOlsson polycounter lvl 14
    Very nice highpoly and bake. The only thing would be the smoothing errors on the rail. You should fix that. Could be the triangles that's switched.

    I think you have a very good base texture, but it's not very exiting to look at atm. There's not really anything that happens with it. You got some dirt in there, but that's it. Would be nice to see some variation in there. Small, medium and big details.

    Keep it up! :)
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  • Lucas Annunziata
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    Lucas Annunziata polycounter lvl 13
    Looking really good dude!

    It's looking really great. Don't go overboard with the grunge on this one, make sure to keep it subtle. Really solid overall though.
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  • The Lone Penguin
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    The Lone Penguin polycounter lvl 9
    Some more texture progress, still doing some spec tweaks at the moment

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  • Lucas Annunziata
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    Lucas Annunziata polycounter lvl 13
    Mmmm... there is is. Maybe you could have the screws on the frame be a different color? maybe you haven't gotten around to it, but they seem to be made of the same material. You might also want to see how the name looks using the same white as the other lettering. And add some back and forth scratches where the safety would move.
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