Crits Please

JonathanLambert

I' ve been working on a gun that's modeled very loosely on the FN2000. I'm about to start texturing but I want to get some feed back first.

Hi poly:




Low poly with normals and around 3k polys

BreaK-

Bake looks like its come out really well. Strange lighting on the front grip, though its hard to say much more atm.

Could we have some wireframes?

Good start man.

JonathanLambert

JonathanLambert

A very basic material in UDK. I'm going to push the textures further, these are just the base maps. Also, the wall and floor meshes aren't mine.

KartoonHead

I like it! The main problem for me is that the really ugly cheek rest you've added in will be RIGHT next to the camera in a first-person game, and it just doesn't have the detail that everything infront of it has. I'd consider adding more loops, and more interest, to that area. Also, as a quick tip, ZBrush's 'Spotlight' is an invaluable tool for painting things like camo over texture seams, if that's the way you want to go with it in the end.

JonathanLambert

Good point. Now that you mention it, I can't stop seeing it.

Computron

Nice beefy edges. Bake came out nicely. :-)

Show a first person view and fix the camouflage discontinuity in your textures. Do you have the color scheme figured out yet?

Computron

KartoonHead wrote: »

I like it! The main problem for me is that the really ugly cheek rest you've added in will be RIGHT next to the camera in a first-person game, and it just doesn't have the detail that everything infront of it has. I'd consider adding more loops, and more interest, to that area. Also, as a quick tip, ZBrush's 'Spotlight' is an invaluable tool for painting things like camo over texture seams, if that's the way you want to go with it in the end.

Noisemaker is the shit for camo:



Tut: http://www.zbrushcentral.com/showthread.php?161185-ZBrush-4R2-Beta-Testing-By-Nicolas-Garilhe

JonathanLambert

Here is an update, I changed the cheek rest and the color scheme. This is a screen grab from max using the Xoliul shader. The gun is for a 3rd person shooter being made with UDK. Man, I really need to learn ZBrush.