WIP engineer

cr3ativdevil

Hi guys, been lurking around for a while and never posted anything before as I thought my skills weren't very good. Got told by a great mind that I need to make mistakes and share them with others in order to move forward so here it is. This is a character that will be re-topologised for a game engine use. I'd welcome feedback and advice, thank you.:poly122:

cr3ativdevil

Hi all again,
Made a few tweaks to his bottox and closed his mouth. I also polypainted it. Now onto the retopology in topogun, first time i've used it so it should be fun. Wish me good luck.

16bit

Something feels creepily off with the head. Eyes?

n88tr

eyes def trying to steal my soul

what is your refs look like? what sort of style are you going for? obv not TF2. Maybe Masseffect 3?

cr3ativdevil

ahahah! Yes i felt the same way, I'm not sure what's wrong with the eyes. Remind me of who framed roger Rabbit, the evil toon. Yes i am going for a mass effect look. Any advice on the eyes? Is it the texture?

cr3ativdevil

Hey guys, just fixed the eye. (well i hope ) I reshaped them and made them smaller as well as changing the texture. Oh and i changed the material that was set to grey so it was a bit too dark and therefore contrasting a bit too much with the bright eyes. I hope it's fixed.

knak47

Looks like he was wearing goggles at one point. His face is dirty looking except aroun the eyes.
Unless its a five o clock shadow across his whole head. I also think his torso is a bit long. I think if you made the torso a little smaller you will have the proportions pretty well sized up.

cr3ativdevil

Thanks guys (16bit and n88tr for the help. Knak47, I was going for the goggles look as he is suppose to be some kind of engineer. I'm going to shrink the torso, although I thought I was pretty happy with the proportions. It goes to show, it's nice to have second opinions. Thanks for pointing out to me.

Alberto Rdrgz

head is looking better.