Old design I'm picking up on again just because I think she's good fun and I need the training. Comments and crits are very welcome - I'm quite rusty and need all the help I can get. ^^
Thanks guys. ^^
Yeah, she's my design, and yeah, that's a helmet she's holding. Don't have an exact design for that, but it's something along these lines.
Very nice, looking forward to seeing progress on this one.
A few things that stand out to me. The angle of her eyes, combined with the lines around her mouth makes it look like she's flinching or in severe discomfort. It makes her look vulnerable which is not fitting of her character.
Her arms look a bit short. Her legs do too in relation to her hips, but it fits her character that she is rather stocky and top heavy, the arms should be a bit longer though I think. And her bust is very round and bulges upwards quite a bit, it makes it look weightless. You should have them droop more to give a sense of weight. You did a good job of it in the concept drawing so go from that.
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Yeah, she's my design, and yeah, that's a helmet she's holding. Don't have an exact design for that, but it's something along these lines.
A few things that stand out to me. The angle of her eyes, combined with the lines around her mouth makes it look like she's flinching or in severe discomfort. It makes her look vulnerable which is not fitting of her character.
Her arms look a bit short. Her legs do too in relation to her hips, but it fits her character that she is rather stocky and top heavy, the arms should be a bit longer though I think. And her bust is very round and bulges upwards quite a bit, it makes it look weightless. You should have them droop more to give a sense of weight. You did a good job of it in the concept drawing so go from that.