[UDK] Scifi level (inspired by DX:HR)

megalmn2000

Hi everyone!
I'm working on a scifi level in UDK.
This piece is aiming for my portfolio so ANY critics is welcome!
I got inspired by Deus Ex 3, Mass Effect, Mirror's Edge, Syndicate, BRINK and the amazing architect Zaha Hadid.

This is only blocking. Lighting and textured models are just for testing purpose. I just want to know if you guys like the architecture, the shapes, the forms?

I plan to add more props after.






My environment is based on this picture :

Thanks a lot!

dissonance

if all you want to show is form, it might be better to switch over to Lighting Only

HughieDM

pretty cool so far but def show it in lighting only

also the picture you have is from the Zaha Hadid bmw central building

its a very cool building and Zaha Hadid is a amazing architect



Just as a sujestion bring some of the cool curves into your scene:

megalmn2000

Thanks guys!

Some updates...

megalmn2000

Some update.
This is my blocking so far:

megalmn2000

Some stuffs to fix and will try to finish it asap!
Screenshot directly from UDK.

chrisradsby

Sexy sexy stuff Keep working!

GragGunslinger

I can't quite put my finger on it, but for some reason, all of your shots make your scene look very tiny as if it's a model, as opposed to an actual livable environment.

I also think your lighting is blowing out some of your scene and is kind of blobby in other places. Over all I think you have something neat here, can't wait to see more!

HughieDM

Looking good so far
I think the thing that is makeing the scene seem small is that your scale on certain items seems off
Your rails on the stairs seem a bit thick and the seats thickness is a bit heavy

megalmn2000

Thanks guys! I'll fix this asap this weekend!

Limewax

this may just be personal taste, but those seats/chairs are just awfully distracting. I wish there were a more elegant design to them... but yeah, just my gut thoughts.

I also like how you're taking a stab at the lighting pretty early. Thats a good direction