Female Sci-Fi Assassin (large images)

venain

Greetings polycount! I recently finished this character and figured I'd share it with you guys. I'm open to critique, however I'm calling this character "done" and moving on to something new, so your critique will be kept in mind for my next project:) Thanks!

Full shot:


Closeups/parts:


Construction:

chrisradsby

That is very nice, I would love an action-pose as well Show textures!

disanski

Very nice work man. Love the proportions and the style - clean and elegant.

grimmrobe

Stance is epic. As above, clean and elegant.

Tenchi

Nicely executed, clean model.

uncle

Not much to say about technical aspects, good stuff.

Concept-wise glowing lights on assasin character will always remind me about particular one:

If she's a ninja she shouldn't be seen, aaight?

OpethRockr55

Looks like you've got some triangles popping up on that back module thing, like a bad bake or weird smoothing groups, I don't know. Other than that - while I would've done some things differently - I really can't complain with the result. Great, clean model.

erroldynamic

Very cool! Love the sleek style.

Sebeuroc

Great job, man! Very nice clean work.

SsSandu_C

uncle - maaannn How dare you! I think you owe him an apology and not for what you said but for posting that pic here. Better yet you owe me an apology for forcing me to see that after that great model. You meany! I'm just joking! Or am I?

Nice work venain! Can you post some flats?

Joshflighter

SsSandu_C wrote: »

uncle - maaannn How dare you! I think you owe him an apology and not for what you said but for posting that pic here.

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Also, I like it! Good job!

PaulP

Nice work! I really like the armour design, simple shapes yet very effective. Also your colour palette works well with the glow.

uncle

Hehe so sorry guys

I hope you know the story about this one, or you won't get the joke

venain

Thanks guys!

Uncle - Hah, yeah glowy bits on assassins don't make much sense, however if you want something to be sci-fi, it HAS to have glowy bits, right?!

OpethRockr55- Yep you're right. I think it was my bake, but I messed with it for so long without any real improvement I just decided to say screw it, move on and learn from it for next time

Here's some flats - Nothing too special here - just an AO bake with color tweaking and some subtle noise/texture overlays on the metal parts of my spec. Face was polypainted in zbrush and baked out to my low poly. All maps are 1024 or lower and the render was in marmoset.

edit: the helm, sword, and back piece have their own maps - if you're interested in seeing any of them, let me know!

flats:

Hayden Zammit

Really awesome. Thanks for showing the textures. They seem really simple, but the materials really work.

gsokol

Looks good. Nice and simple, and your materials read well.

Minor critique, but I feel like the blue chest part could have used a complement on the abdomen to give a little more color balance. Maybe on the small of the back as well.

SsSandu_C

uncle wrote: »

Hehe so sorry guys

I hope you know the story about this one, or you won't get the joke

No prob man. I was kidding too. I read the whole thread where that picture appears. I dare not say its name. hehe

Thank for the flats venain! I appreciate it

venain

gsokol wrote: »

Looks good. Nice and simple, and your materials read well.

Minor critique, but I feel like the blue chest part could have used a complement on the abdomen to give a little more color balance. Maybe on the small of the back as well.

Good crit, I agree. I actually was planning on making a belt/hilt thing for the swords that would fit that role, I may still do it down the line at some point. Thanks!

shawnell3d

i love this character and w/e alien race it might be my only suggestion is to add more detail or brushed/scratched detail in the spec unless this is a brand new suit but i think it might make it more interesting ...be subtle if you decide to

Oniram

uncle wrote: »

Concept-wise glowing lights on assasin character will always remind me about particular one:

LMAO! that will live on in the hearts of many for years and years.

cool character venain. has a slightly tron-ish feel to it. only thing crit-wise i could say about it is the weapons look too thin.. in regards to the hilt.

venain

Thanks guys!

shawnell3d - I did try a "dirty" version and didn't like it as much, but I think you're right, I just have to be more subtle about it

Oniram - Yeah, I agree, the weapon is too thin