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First game model "zombie"
xjag2k
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xjag2k
Jan 2012
Hi guys, this is my first work for games, and is not much but i will apreciate any c&c
you guys are amazing, there are many huge artist around this forum.
Good luck,cheers from Argentina and thanks.
Jeremias
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tristamus
polycounter lvl 9
Jan 2012
I'm not an Character artist, but this looks GREAT to me for a first timer! Keep it up man!
I'm sure a Character artist will come in here shortly and help you out with some useful criticism :]
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BeserK
polycounter lvl 12
Jan 2012
Hey man, looks great for a first model!
One or two things... the teeth look way too low on his skull, and there should be a little more detail on his torn off ears
Also, some blood on his shirt would help sell the character.
Keep it going, looking forward to updates!
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BARDLER
polycounter lvl 12
Jan 2012
I think the stub could be more gross looking, like maybe his bone sticking out or something
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MGM
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Jan 2012
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xjag2k
Jan 2012
Thank guys!
tristamus
: thanks for comment
BeserK
: totally agree, thanks for the advices.
BARDLER
: sure, i must see some more references about it, thanks
MGM
: great work ! congratulations
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I'm sure a Character artist will come in here shortly and help you out with some useful criticism :]
One or two things... the teeth look way too low on his skull, and there should be a little more detail on his torn off ears
Also, some blood on his shirt would help sell the character.
Keep it going, looking forward to updates!
tristamus : thanks for comment
BeserK : totally agree, thanks for the advices.
BARDLER : sure, i must see some more references about it, thanks
MGM: great work ! congratulations