Retopin' goblin'

refraction

First post here, hope I'm doing it right. I'm working on this character, which was mainly for learning about retopologizing. At this stage, I just want to clean up some of the low res geo a bit around the legs and feet, then go paint him up which I probably should have done at the initial high rez sculpting stage.

Anyway, here he is, if anything looks wrong or broken, I'd love to hear it

Sculpt in Z-brush:



And in Marmoset:

Snader

The shoulderpad is too blocky. The knuckle pad (and possibly the other 2 arm pads) could be a bit lighter. The hands and feet seem somewhat dense, too.

refraction

Snader wrote: »

The shoulderpad is too blocky. The knuckle pad (and possibly the other 2 arm pads) could be a bit lighter. The hands and feet seem somewhat dense, too.

Thanks! That's exactly the kind of feedback I'm looking for I'll fix those areas while I cleaning up the retopo mesh.

refraction

I'm calling this one finished.. it dragged on too long but I learned a lot! I want to aim for more character and to convey a story in future characters.. this guy doesn't read particularly well..