Gobelin/Alien Head [ Need advice plz ]

Snedgel

Hi , Here is the head of my Gobelin/Alin that i must create for a school work

But it's my first creature , so could you give me some advice to the zbrush, essentially for the skin.











Thank you !!!

Ignoto

Looks good, but I should try to add some volume to the neck, at the bottom of his skull, also add some mucle anatomy for the neck to fill the extra volume.
I think the neck is thin for that big head.

Snedgel

I was working on the neck when i saw your message

Andreas

First, decide whether its an alien or a goblin.

Then lower the ears so that they are more in line with the nose and eyes.

Snedgel

I'm not gonna decide if its a gobelin or an alien because i can mix whatever i want to create this creature so i mix an alien and a gobelin

slipsius

I like it! I do think the ears either need to be lowered to be on eye level, like andreas said, or shrink them a little bit. make the base of them skinnier

Snedgel

is that better for the ears ?

spiderDude

I think the anatomy of the jaw needs to be worked on a little bit more. For such a narrow jaw his lips would be smaller. You'll find that the corner of the lips line up
with the canine teeth.

With the lips being a bit wide on your creature, the jaw will need to be wider or you can make the lips shorter to fit the jaw. The chin looks fine from the side view, but doesn't fit well in the front view, it looks almost detached from the front. Maybe you might need to indicate the depressor muscles on the side a little bit more to make it feel attached.

Your detailing is coming out good and I think these corrections will help to tie in the face and feel for the creature. Looking forward to the final outcome

PaulP

Very cool work so far! One thing that stands out is the inconsistent fat distribution. The neckline and bulk of the head suggests he is very skinny and he bone structure is well defined, but his eyebrows, nose, forehead, and area above the mouth suggest a more fatty distribution, especially with the creasing.

JGcount

I would pull out the entire mouth area in the profile to make for a more intersting silhouette.

Snedgel

Thanks for all your advice

I'm gonna change the mouth on the low poly this afternoon.

I do the Lowpoly mesh yesterday :





And here is the first result un udk ( Ao +NM ) 2048*2048 for the moment ( gonna reduce after to 1024*1024)

Snedgel

Which color did you prefer ?


Green ?






Red ?







Blue ?

uncle

Could you also provide cyan, magenta and yellow version? :P

Snedgel

Yes i post it in 5 min

I work a little the texture ( i'm not an expert ine texrtuing )

Here is the result

Snedgel

Snedgel

Any advice for the texture ?
( good version is this one )

Snedgel

I've finished the head :

Here is the texture




And here is the result in Udk :

Snedgel

WIP body

the next thing to do is to dress him and give him weapon

Snedgel

Snader

I think you've got some pretty skewed polygon densities. The head mesh seems to be well over 5000 triangles, maybe 7500 even. But I can see the polygons on his necklace and fingertips, and his feet end in a point - no toe geometry whatsoever.

Snedgel

at snader : i must optimize the head yes ,
but for the necklace , it's just a draw on photoshop
and for his feet , i'm gonna dress him whith shoes so don't need toe