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maatin polycounter lvl 7
I started making this female a few weeks ago. working on it when i´m not doing school stuff.
crit away!
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  • Tobbo
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    Tobbo polycounter lvl 11
    It's a good start. Are you working from a reference?

    Her arms and hands are too small/short. I would work on making her neck and upper chest area have more form and definition. Also, I would make her jaw line more subtle and soft.

    That should be a good start for you to improve this piece.
  • Eastlin
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    Her hands are tiny man :S however i like the overall style
  • maatin
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    maatin polycounter lvl 7
    Tobbo wrote: »
    It's a good start. Are you working from a reference?

    Her arms and hands are too small/short. I would work on making her neck and upper chest area have more form and definition. Also, I would make her jaw line more subtle and soft.

    That should be a good start for you to improve this piece.


    yeah i used a reference to begin with but made alot of changes while sculpting, so alot of the proportions may have gotten lost along the way.

    i tried making the arms and hand larger a few days ago but i thought it looked a bit wierd, but i had been sitting for about 8 hours straight at that point.
    i will try fixing the hands and arms as well as the jawline!

    thanks for the pointers!
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