Sketchbook: Bummer6

Bummer6

Hi there people! I'm not much for 3D at the moment, although I do know a few things about 3Ds max and I've done quite a bit of work in it before.

I'm mostly going to focus on digital painting for now, I might go into 3D once in a while though.

Anyway, I'm looking for ways to improve, so I welcome all the criticism I can get!

So here's my current portfolio.

Bummer6

Just a quick update. Been doing some 3D lately and this is what I'm working on right now. It's not great, but I think it's going to look pretty decent once it's textured... and has his eye.

Alismuffin

You have q good painting stykle, but the concepts seem a little plain. Maybe spice them up with more stuff?

Bummer6

Been trying to do so as much as possible. I'm starting to get better at detailing now, but I still have to push it one step further.

Bummer6

Here's my latest piece of work... Sorry for the slow updating, been really busy. All criticism is welcome!

Bummer6

One will rise, one will fall... Who would win? DISCUSS! Haha. Anyway, the purple mage is basically done, so here it is!

Bummer6

Bump... Also, here he is with his original background color and lightning. :P

Saibell

You seem to have a good base of drawing technique, but as they told you in previous comments you could polish your concepts. Maybe a good way to do that could be to join or start a project so you'll have specific goals. Anyway, I like that your art is oldschool. Keep it up!!

Bummer6

Thanks for the kind words! I finished this a while back, I think it's a pretty big improvement over the previous stuff I've posted. ^^'

Saibell

Nice, I love the alien. I can see that you improved since the last post, and I'm glad to see something recent cause the other drawings where last year's drawings :P

Now, you where asking for feedback, whitin my own limited experience, I can tell you that its good that you have finished drawings and that you know how to render them and make them look professional. But, sometimes, you could also experiment with perspective and anathomy, lots of poses, experiment with colouring and lighting... ; these don't have to be so finished, just scketches to study.
I don't mean to offend you, just feedback. Maybe I've just said something that you aleready knew, again, no offense intended.
Keep it up!