Viking Warrior

Le0n2 · Dec 2011

This is Character I made for a university project. He is loosely based of the protaganist from battle for Asgard, a game that I haven't played but I liked the look of the main character.

Any critique or helpful information/links will be greatly appreciated

Thanks a lot

terrortowers · Dec 2011

nice work!

darthwilson · Dec 2011

The metal buckle on the armour could have more shine to it by tweaking the specular and the hair is a bit plain, do some alpha map texturing to allow some transparency to it and it will look much better!

chrisradsby · Dec 2011

He is staring, eyes are way too wide. Close them up a little bit by moving some vertices around to make it look more natural. They are also very big but this might help a little. Good work!

Ikosan · Dec 2011

his big eyes make him look a little 'kawai', not a good look for any self respecting viking. I'd look into the shape of the lips, the upper lip should overlap the lower, look into the various plane changes going on there as well

Bombshell · Dec 2011

the chest seems very flat, as do the sides.
the abdomen looks like it just dips in.
His chest and belly hair looks too thick, its like he has ants all over him.
The hair should contrast a bit more to actually shade like and look like hair. its more of a hood at the moment.
The diffuse on the mouth makes his top lip seem wider.
And I think more detail could be worked into his arm belt things normal maps.

Most of these are just knit-pick things which you could work on to make it better, so far its looking okay.

Alismuffin · Dec 2011

Looks like Jesus!
But yes definitely need to sort his eyes out

Kozak · Dec 2011

He looks very...clean for a viking warrior. I think that may be causing the Jesus look :-)

bsjkupo · Dec 2011

Aside from the obvious Jesus lookalike and aforementioned crits, I would say that the hair at the back of the head looks a bit weird, it wouldn't hang like that unless it was at drastically different lengths.

Awesome stuff!

paradise.engineering · Dec 2011

I hope Id be the first one to say it's Jesus. That body hair really needs more work and his eyes need more life.

Viking Warrior

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