My old Darth vader....

lonewolfgarou

This is a model of Darth Vader i did, a year ago in zbrush 3.5

I want to remodel with my new Zbrush4R2, using the new features
I need some feedback, any helpful comment will be greatly appreciated









http://i1101.photobucket.com/albums/g421/lonewolfgarou/59420_436780167117_730212117_5034238_4543375_n.jpg

The background, in the final render is not mine it was a school project it not for any commercial purposes.

lonewolfgarou

Razgriz

It definitely needs lens flare and a little bit more bloom, to bring out the subtlety of the details.

Shiniku

Overall the model just needs more finesse, and more time put into it. The sculpt is looking pretty blobby, and it's just not all that accurate. I can tell it's supposed to be darth vader, but certain details and proportions are off.

One thing that's bothering me is the helmet.. it seems to be sitting on about the right place in the sculpts, but in the final render it's way too high. We never see that much of his.. uh, forehead.

Also his fingers look square and the death star looks pretty half-assed. Looks like a dented rock to be honest.

uncle

Slow down, take a few steps back. Everything here looks rushed.

Maybe you should consider concentrating on modeling first. Right now there are to many flaws to point out... Forget the details, take a longer look at proportions, compare with original. Try to achieve maximum likeliness with overall shape. Rinse-repeat.

Then proceed with detail, rendering, composition.