Corpse and Mayhem
polycounter lvl 13
Hello my fellow polycounters!! 
So much amazing art on this awesome site and so much inspiration. I have decided to really challenge myself to improve my art.
My problem areas are: texturing
clothing
hair
layered items
posing
My personal challenge is a concept by Manuhell on CGHub
I will be posting all of my WIPs and I would love to receive as much critiques as possible.
So much amazing art on this awesome site and so much inspiration. I have decided to really challenge myself to improve my art.
My problem areas are: texturing
clothing
hair
layered items
posing
My personal challenge is a concept by Manuhell on CGHub
I will be posting all of my WIPs and I would love to receive as much critiques as possible.
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I'll start planning on a design for that, what would you have in mind?
Thank you for your input
juguefre - I'm not sure if it is a boston terrier or a skinny bull dog, lol
its been bugging me so far.
I absolutely love this concept, it's very stylized and very interesting! I urge you to keep to the concept.
(PS ~ I love the boo hair bead)
So far the populous vote on here and other input is to stick with the bare chest....so those puppies will stay bare, lol
next thing for me to focus on is getting the face right...its far from the concept at the moment
thank you for your input
Fix the pose too, she looks like she's gonna topple forward.
NSFW! This is helpful to you, especially 2nd row 3rd pic:
http://www.posespace.com/posetool/showcontact.aspx?sku=lexi012
In the end it's up to you, it's a beautiful concept, very tricky though because just everything about it will throw you off. The pants waistline are almost at her private parts, 2-3 cm more and she would've shown it all. The hips are wide, she looks muscular and honestly her legs look really really long. I do think it can work in 2d, in 3d however it'll take a lot of work to make it look alright.
Good luck!
Maybe to make it work, I could stretch the realism a little bit, slightly stylized.
Thank you again Snader, gilesruscoe, and chrisradsby, it shall be improved
You really need to work on that squashed in cranium at this point. It can't be helping your proportions on the rest of the model.
Keep the updates coming on this. When I'm good enough I'll attempt this myself. Did u create a new base mesh for this or you got an existing one?
newto3d - I used a generic base mesh that I like to begin my models with
the dog looks like a french bulldog to me.
which is a funny choice for any kinda post apoc world since they can not breed on their own and require artificial insemination and cessarian sections as part of their standard reproduction
@Rhinokey- nice, now I have a better ref for the dog, that is pretty funny now that you mention it, I didn't know that
At this point with everything blocked out, I am doing more detailed hard surfaces modeling in Maya
Glad to see you're back at it, I've still got this thread subscribed too.
I'm going to chime in on the boobs and say go with the concept. She really doesn't look like the type to care about being punched in the tit and I think the body paint brings it somewhat into the realm of decency. If you were really worried you might try making them smaller.
Also, Rhinokey beat me to it, but yeah, definitely a french bulldog. I love the shape of those critters, but holy crap do they ever suck from an evolutionary standpoint. Along with not being to procreate on their own, they can't swim!
@Sputch - thank you for your input, I had no idea about french bulldogs until Rhinokey mentioned it. Terrible from an evolutionary standpoint lol
Since the concept doesn't show the back of the vest, I guess I have some creative freedom with it. Any ideas you guys think might be cool?
Or possibly some way those skull things attach, still trying to figure that one out. That is kinda last on the list for the modeling phase.
Just kidding. Really nice progress. The face is looking awesome.
@nyx702 - sweet, I see that you modeled out one of his other concepts, looks pretty sick, good job :thumbup::thumbup::thumbup:
for providing me with a model sheet for Mayhem. So much more detail to the
back, I love it
I will have a satisfying update on Mayhem this friday, be sure to check out Manuhell's cghub page, he is one talented guy.
she seems to have quite long arms and oversized hands on concepts, i wonder if that has a purpose.
your version on the other hand has very small hands.
Why would you ever want to cover boobs, its practical from a sexual standpoint.
Been quite some time since I've posted an update. I've been extremely busy with some freelance stuff, but I am still using any free time I have to work on this awesome concept. Here is the current progress thus far
The back of the vest is pretty intricate, going to be spending some time on that.
really cool. But I don't think that this belt is usefull. It should be over the hips, not under...
Here is what I mean :
Just my opinion ^^.
@nyx702- trust me, I won't let this thread die. I'm just busy with work that I don't get to work on this as much as I would like, so progress for right now is slow
@texelion- that is a good input, thank you. I'm going to stick close to concept though, and looking at it now, I have my belt a bit lower than the concept. I'll fix that hopefully today if time allows it.
Hello everyone that is following this thread,
I've been away for some time and because of my absence...this thread was technically dead
I had some personal situations that required my attention and unfortunately all my personal projects had to take the back seat:poly134::poly134::poly134:
only had time for my freelance, but now I have time. Still a little bit preoccupied, but enough time for my personal art now:):):):)
SSSooooooOOOoooooOOOooo......here is a little teaser paint over for now:poly142:
Don't worry guys, I am def seeing this through the end cause a love this concept soo much, just bare with me
I needed to make fun of myself :poly124::poly124:
I use the same brush for texturing skin on a low rgb setting, I feel that it coats the colors nicely.