[MUTANT]MMA-Dan!

Dan!

oh hell yes.. its on
I'm going with MMA fighter and mini boss "Solid" Snake Blitzkin-

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ClatoVerata

Great concept!!

Jeff Parrott

LOL. Needs 90% more mullet and just camo board shorts if he's MMA.

Sirdelita

agree on mullet

Dan!

hehe- i see I'll have to do some sketching, if I get a mullet in there it'll have to be perfect. Now here is a phrase you should randomly ask people throughout the day:

How does one put a mullet on a snake?

ScudzAlmighty

Sweeeeeeeet.
I have nothing more constructive to add.

JGcount

Please keep the arm-to-torso proportion ratio - loving it.

Dan!

thanks fellas- got im blocked in- throwing in some added 90s reference by giving him a Surge can(tip o the hat to RV_ELs Guile)

Kip McSkipster

Yup, this is shaping up nicely! I also like the proportions, also with jeffro, I think shorts only (and gloves).

WillC3D

Great concept and proportions. This looks like it will be a solid piece of work. The only criticism I can offer is that it doesn't look sporty. Only militant. It would be best if anyone could observe the character and know which sport it depicts.

Dan!

thanks for the crits and advice everyone- hopefully i met a good middle ground - wip so far

Tadao215

woooaah, im really liking this one

ScudzAlmighty

shit that's awesome.

I think you should ease up on the snakeskin pattern, take it out of the lighter area's of the skin like you have in the concept. You could make the eye-patch a bit bigger, right now it doesn't really stand out ayt first glance abnd it just looks like he has one yellow eye and one white eye.

Tadao215

may we see your texture sheet??

Gannon

Snake cakes

MattQ86

Well that was quick.

Grubber

Oh cool!

EtotheRic

Nice progress. I like the mass going on in your concept.

Jeff Parrott

Looks awesome man. Now for the rest of the contest make the arena too!

Diruengurei

Awesome OoO

Gannon

MattQ86 wrote: »

Well that was quick.

that's what she said.

ADD A TAIL!

leslievdb

nice progress, the only crit i can give you is to make the scales flow with the form because now it looks like an overlayed pattern. also add some variations and maybe a little depth to them on some locations.

MattQ86

Gannon wrote: »

that's what she said.

ADD A TAIL!

You know Gannon, I hear they make pills for that.

Also, I agree. A tail would add nicely to the character.

Sukotto

Looking so nice but I agree about working on the scales and giving them more flow. Also, his head is reading more like a lizard head than a snake head, is he supposed to be a specific type of snake?

Vailias

scale flow is odd and rather uniform. Looks just kinda pasted over the colors. Scales are hard though.

Dan!

re:scales

CHALLENGE ACCEPTED

sukotto- generic snake head- looks like ill have to push it a bit harder to sell as more than just reptilian
thanks for the crits and comments

Lord Fryingpan

Please allow me to make a tiny suggestion if you really want to stick to the snake idea.

Also, really great job so far.

mxb8924

I Think it looks awesome right now but if you wanted to push it I got some suggestions.

1. Like a lot said, add some variation. If you went back towards your concept and just did the things like rips in the shirt, blood and unravel-lings on the wraps, you should be fine.
2. This is probably something your probably gonna do, but a more badass pose.

mryogesh123

Wow great entry and good execution from concept to model. Only suggestion i mite make is that i like the way the scales aren't uniform in the concept. Maybe having areas where there are bigger darker scales to break up the repetition of surface detail. Silhouette is amazing, is there going to be an arena or another character maybe???

Dan!

Thanks guys!- I adjusted the size/shape of the head- scales-shape of the calves-some more progress on other things-

DockRock

He has a bit of an action figure feel to him, reminds me of the cartoon. Awesome stuff.

RogelioD

Love the way this is shaping up! "Dan!" is my hero!

Dan!

thanks guys- I was definitely trying for the action figure look.

obeyurnapster

if i had to say smthg, i would say that the orange color is a bit too " flashy ".

Apart from that, its a great execution !

Dan!

thanks for the feedback I'll see if I can tone it down.

Sukotto

I kinda like the orange though, it makes him look more cartoony and action-figurish

EtotheRic

I like the new scales. The color hearkens back to the 16 bit era which I think is pretty cool.

TehSplatt

this is awsome i really like it but if theres one thing i can see its the way the calf muscle sticks out of the boot dont know if im just drunk or if the boot goes up and the calf just sticks straight out kinda looks like a rool of fat haha but looks cool man

Baddcog

Yeah I think you should have the shape of the calf in the boot too, but it's looking pretty awesome and the change of scales was a big improvement.

He'd also work great as a salamander (alternate skin for a fighting game)

How about some rivets on the eye patch?

Dan!

Thanks for looking- Baddcog- I think rivets will have to happen! latest changes

OniLolz

It`s so damn good! Only a suggestion: maybe you should fix the back of the shirt a little bit (near de neck) and just maybe change the color, like dark gray or something.

Dan!

ooh looks like I have a stray mask there as well.

JGcount

Im really loving the upper arms now, especially with the new grey streaks. However, that can is annoying the hell out of me. It might be the colour itself, but I feel its the tone. It is way too bright. And also, the logo on it reads really noisy.

beta_channel

Needs blood!!! All up on the boot toe and his wraps. Also what others mentioned about masks and such.

butt_sahib

ADD A SHIT LOAD OF VEINS

shagz412

Pimpin' ain't easy but you definitely but you def make it look sexy. Sweet work Dan!

Mrandk

Love the way you went with this guy dan, though I think you might benefit from showing off some of the definition in his torso. Some sort of indication of what his muscles are doing to that tight shirt would be nice. Just a suggestion, Keep it up!

EtotheRic

Not entered?! Came out great anyway.

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EtotheRic wrote: »

Not entered?! Came out great anyway.

I'm shocked as well. This was one of my favorites