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[WIP] Space Corridor

Hey, just finishing up a small scene for a uni project. What y'all think?

It's also my first post so be brutal! :poly122:

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  • Dimfist
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    Dimfist polycounter lvl 8
    The white columns look to have some space inbetween itself and where it meets the roof. Also I'd work on your color scheme a bit. Also, if you are going to bother using normals, maybe you should push em a bit further, add some nice details. honestly you could of added 100polys and achieved what you got going on there with normals.
    I'm thinking get some reference. I new someone to use the bottom of a shoe as a ref for her sci-fi wall and it looked awesome :D
  • Olive.
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    Thanks for the criticism. Will defiantly spend more time on the normals. It was also my first time really using normals so I was a bit hesitant in their usage.
  • nick2730
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    Honestly, its very boring. Scene has very little depth cause the lighting is constant and the colors are clashing hard core. Like Dimfist said look at some reference to get an idea for color pallet
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