WIP - Lili (need critique)

raging_river · Nov 2011

Hi all, i'm trying to re-imagine Lili from Tekken with a Amazon/Jungle theme,I just want some general feedback so far for my model, as I plan to improve it. Any comments will be appreciated. (character has no hair as I plan to add it later)

and some clothing:

almighty_gir · Nov 2011

can you post your references?

raging_river · Nov 2011

References:

The main image used to create the base mesh was Andrew Loomis's Ideal Female, anything you can critique so far?

satanarchist · Nov 2011

Looks great keep up the great work

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Steve Schulze · Nov 2011

You need to pay a lot more attention to the proportions and anatomy - you're a long way off pretty much across the board. You've got a decent set of photograpic elevations there - the ones with the green background. You'd be far better using those as a base.

almighty_gir · Nov 2011

okay, first of all use perspective mode in zbrush.

second of all, if you're going to use references like that, try to make sure they're ones you've drawn yourself. and look at as many pictures of REAL women while you do it as possible. all you need to do is look at your mother/sister/cousin/friends to see that the reference you posted is wrong.

anyway, here's a set of refs i have on my machine (downrez'd), hope they help somewhat. i'll use links for most of them, first one is example.

raging_river · Nov 2011

Thank you, really appreciate the comments, and TY almighty_gir for posting up the ref. I agree the proportion needs correcting! More progress to come... and more critique

WIP - Lili (need critique)

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