Oakley Gloves + Some other works

Revolutionart

Hey guys, im new here and wanted to show you my latest work, starting with the Oakley Gloves:

I used 3ds max 2011 (model and baked normals) and Zbrush 4 for the gloves + arm + sleeve

The gloves are rigged.



Baked normals




Another work i wanted to show is a car, so here is the render:

Ps. ive put this car into the NFS Shift game, video can be found on my site (link at the bottom)



The rest of my works can be found at my website i don't want to make this a huge thread :P

Crits are always welcome

Greets

http://www.revolutionart.nl/3ddesign.html

Computron

The gloves seem a little flat. Also, why did you watermark the normals when if someone wanted to steal it, they would need the exact same mesh/uvs you have?

Revolutionart

Good point about the normal map lol, i won't do that anymore the gloves aren't that flat or do you mean the part between the hand and arm? if so i noticed, ill probably fix it sometime thanks

Computron

it looks like the normal maps need to have some more depth. Like the intensity slider in crazy bump.

Revolutionart

Yeah i didn't had it thick enough on the high poly model, i probably can fix it in photoshop

Boyso

I have a set if you need more refs.

Only thing that pops in my head is that the carbon fiber part is thicker. Maybe model it in your low.

When you hand is flat, the hard knuckles are slightly thicker than the rest of the glove. I don't know if that makes sense.

Revolutionart

Refs are always welcome , i fixed the knuckles so far, and fixed the flat stuff a bit on the normal map.

Boyso

MUCH better.

However, only the part around the knuckles is leather. The rest is all nylon. Maybe I'd tone down the spec a bit on these areas.

Here's some refs I just took. Sorry, photography isn't in my skillset :P

Revolutionart

Thanks for the refs and no prob lol, i think im pretty much correct tho, with the leather and nylon as you can see on the following image:

Red = Leather
Green = "Nylon"
Blue = i believe some ventilating material

Boyso

Yup exactly.

If it can help, here's the tag :

50% Nylon
20% Span
15% Polyurethane
10% Genuine Leather
5% Keprotec

Computron

the blackish circular indent things in front of the knuckles look like they indent more into the surface around them and pop outward more. I assume this is for a first person view? Maybe you could spend some more polys on this and model some of these details at least slightly. even if its not a fps model, gloves are pretty rare, you can afford it.

Revolutionart

Uhm maybe i will tho i don't feel much for redo baking it and changing the uv map etc.

almighty_gir

for the carbon fibre in the knuckles, make the normal completely smooth, and use gloss/specular maps to achieve the right look.

JoshC

Something you might want to think about to make the gloves stand out more is probably to dirty them up a bit, unless the look is to be brand new out of the box. If that isn't the case then darkening up the leather, sweat stains, scratches and tears would make the gloves look more real.



Also, if you actually look at Oakley gloves that are worn, they aren't all that form fitting and tend to have a little bit of baggyness to them. Not a lot, but some. Like the others are saying, the Oakley symbol and the rubber nibs on the fingers should probably be accented from the low poly and the nibs should come out more. Gir has it right on with the carbon fiber in that it should be smooth and letting the other maps he mentioned pull out that detail. It also looks as if the nuckles need to come up much more.

Revolutionart

Alright, so ive been away for a while or actually did other stuff anyways. after these crits and talking to some other guys. ive decided to remodel the oakley gloves. so you can clearly see that the model has changed in several ways.

Alot of things are done propper, well here is the render.



Now i will smooth out the leather and the fibre glass, so in the next update it will be smooth, after the new bake i will do the fibreglass on the spec map etc.

thanks for the crits its really helpfull, btw it will get a dirt layer to make it look worn etc. etc. you know

Revolutionart

Hi, New update fixed alot on the glove and redid alot and left out some stuff.

its not done yet.



greets

Kosai106

Mark, you should update the thread with some of your newer shots, it's shaping up nicely!

Revolutionart

I will and darn i deleted my photo lol, anyways heres a new render crits are welcome:

ActionDawg

wow, that's a great improvement.

Shogun3d

Nice work! Looks fantastic.

Revolutionart

thanks guys, a new update will come soon (arm and sleeve) working on the High poly sleeve atm.

Revolutionart

New update: Watch for the oakley gloves, CX Swiss Military Hurricane Watch



Greets

Aga22

much improvement on the gloves, great work! great work on the car too, i dont wanna make fun of the fact that such a car doesnt belong in a need for speed game since its obviously YOUR car,(otherwise why would you model it?)... heheh keep up the good work!

Revolutionart

Aga22 wrote: »

much improvement on the gloves, great work! great work on the car too, i dont wanna make fun of the fact that such a car doesnt belong in a need for speed game since its obviously YOUR car,(otherwise why would you model it?)... heheh keep up the good work!

Thanks alot

Haha i agree the car doesn't belong in a NFS game but i had to do something with it and well NFS was the first thing in my mind :P

Ill try and keep up the good work

PS. here my POF 308 rifle:



Still need some fixing on the edges and smooth some stuff

Aga22

that's the hi-poly i guess? nice work, i'm working on a machine gun now so i know it's a bitch to make...and to bake!

Revolutionart

Aga22 wrote: »

that's the hi-poly i guess? nice work, i'm working on a machine gun now so i know it's a bitch to make...and to bake!

Thats hi-poly indeed, yeah lots of work, ive had a different stock but that wasn't as cool as i hoped so i modelled the a new stock but ill be bringing the hi-poly into zbrush fix edges makes them smoother.

Revolutionart

Updates: Oakley Gloves, M590 Shotgun, Swiss Watch and a Barrel.



Barrel:





Mossberg 590 shotgun:

Low poly + Wireframe:



High Poly:



Lowpoly + Normal + Texture = Done



Colt Python, however i'm not 100% happy with the outcome of this. still worth to show.




World Render, map made in mudbox for the cryengine 3



And a quick wip, just started:



Thats it for now

Revolutionart

Finished IA Grip:

Revolutionart

Full Portfolio can be found here: http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=143741

Poinball

I see a lot a very interesting stuff here. Keep the good work !