SamBrown-Robot

line726

I am a Student
This is a 3D model of a Robot based on SamBrown's concept.
critique? Thank you.


By line726 at 2011-10-09


By line726 at 2011-10-09


By line726 at 2011-10-09


After hearing people's apinions, I ruduced the scratches.

By line726 at 2011-10-10

Barbarian

Nice work! I like the weathering effect. What is the scale of the robot? Perhaps a ground plane would help add character.

Is that a specular highlight on the upper left side (facing camera) toward the back?

burtonyang

you defined the yellow parts as paint, and it's as shiny as the metal.

Lonewolf

i like

wester

I think the texture on this guy is way too busy. I like the scratches on the worn edges, but not sure i like the wear and tear towards the center of the planes.

glenatron

Agree with wester, lose some of the scratches/chips near the centre of the panels.
Also, slap a gloss map in there to distinguish between the matte of the metal and the gloss of the paint.
Other than that, cracking work. The model and unwrap are tight. Really really tight

cupsster

I want to see unfold animation and also think that there is too much noise in texture.. Clean up and do only few of really major scratches on body and more scratches on foots.. Good work and nice unwrap I must say.

Rhoutermans

I agree with the texture being a bit too noisy. But still, great stuff

HitmonInfinity

Great work! At first glance I thought there was a white wireframe from the waist down. It's a bit intense on the metal parts.