Help me be become not-so-sucking artist :3
Hey guise, I present you my very first character that I'm actually going to finish! ^^
What can I do to make her not suck so much?
What can I do to make her not suck so much?
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It's a tough one. In reality it has many issues. If I were to crit one specific area, it would leave the rest of it out in the open. So the only fair crit I can think of is simply a blanket "learn more anatomy". But that's obviously not so helpful.
The clue here is that you cannot see anything wrong with it. Which means you need to develop an eye for proportions and shape.
You should really set out a VERY specific goal before you start something like this. Maybe find some piece of art from an artist you like where the proportions are awesome (in your opinion). Then make a character that imitates those proportions. Basically copy that one aspect from him, but have the rest be yours. If at a loss, a good source for this is anatomy books. There's tons of gold in those that you can try and implement into your art.
Then once you've hit that goal, that's how you know you're done with it. If you find yourself in a situation like this, where you know there's stuff wrong with it, but you don't know what, then that's a sign you didn't accomplish your goals (or that you didn't have any).
My best advice then would be to call this one done, and start on another one with a specific goal in mind. Then once that one is done (when you've hit your goal), call that one done and move on to the next one. And so on and so forth. Two or three of those down the line, and this character you posted here will look like total crap even to you. That's when you remove it from your portfolio.
Hope this helps. Just my 2cents on this.
First off. Remove the head and armor from the body and check proportions to a human female of the same build of your character. Not the concept art, but actual human photos.
You can find good resources at 3d.sk if you don't have any reference already.
Look at the image and your model from front side and 3/4th view and if you still can't see what is wrong with it. Print screen and place your screen cap over the correct image and see where the body is off from the reference.
Then make sure the head matches up with reference as well.
It might be just me but does the character have normal maps on it besides the skin suit? If so the normals are doing nothing for it. Go back and re sculpt once you have correct shapes. Make sure you do bigger and deeper sculpting, push it farther then you currently have. You seem to have only secondary detail in the normal map and you need to have some primary detail.
Lastly the textures variation is quite boring. The only part of the image that is interesting to look at is the red "tie" bit on the chest. Maybe incorporate that same red and white other places on the armor to match the rest of the armor with that piece.
Sorry I can't be more specific, and I hope that helps.
Proportions are more than just the length of the arms in relation to the torso. It's the girth of the arms, the size of the eyes in relation to the head, the momentum of the curves. For example, if you place your hand and lower arm flat on the table, you'll notice that the there is a gap under the wrist. If your character did that, it would lie flat on the table with no difference in height or flow.
I will give you the most important lesson you need to learn: Start thinking critically, start COMPARING with your reference images each step on the way. You really need to gather the proper reference and stop using "charts" and "graphs" -- and start using your observant eye.
learn the anatomy
done
the rest is just little models.
The arms seem very thin compared to the chest as do the legs. Seems bigger thighs are needed to support the bigger chest. Arms look like they could be a bit longer too.