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woody house modeling from the famous Spyro

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This is a little house from wood made from the sketch of Spyro

i hope you like it

feedback please :)

Portfolio: http://leveldesigner.carbonmade.com

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  • Next
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    Next polycounter lvl 12
    hi there!

    here a few tips:

    Maybe post all ur stuff in one thread so it is easier for ppl to give feedback.
    What would also be great if u want feedback post some texture flats. what i can see is that the textures seem to be stretched to much which is not so good and they are way to blurry too and give the sticks a unique tileable texture not the same as the planks. Modeling seems okay but the wooden sticks could be optimized a lot. less dents but a few at the right places maybe.

    cheers next
  • Baddcog
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    Baddcog polycounter lvl 9
    The wire is a bit hard to read , orange especially and with the grid there it's even harder.

    The ropes on the buckets seem to have a lot of segments when they probably only need 2.

    I agree the same tex from planks on posts doesn't look good.

    And the roof could really use some polys for depth instead of just being a flat plane.
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