I think you may of gone overboard with the top view shape, the hips should be a bit wider. Also believe the tail should be skinnier when viewed from the top
Hey Corinne! Nice start lil' miss. Zac is right about the hips and tail. Over all, though, the shappes are coming together. Pay a little more attention to the underlying structure on the model and try and get some mass buildup around the shoulder blades and hips. I'm actually a little worse for wear right now so maybe I can take a look at it when you come in on monday. It's your first day, right? I think?
Tried fixing the proportions and adding more underlying structure to the guy.
ZacD - Thanks for the help, I think your right I did go kind of over board with the proportions on the top view. I tried to fix it but am experimenting with keeping the fatter more lizard/crocodile like tail. The thought was that it might fit the concept better, but please let me know what you think.
stoofoo - Hey Joe! I recognized you by your mustache haha. Thanks for taking a look at my critter. Monday is my first day so I'll see you then .
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ZacD - Thanks for the help, I think your right I did go kind of over board with the proportions on the top view. I tried to fix it but am experimenting with keeping the fatter more lizard/crocodile like tail. The thought was that it might fit the concept better, but please let me know what you think.
stoofoo - Hey Joe! I recognized you by your mustache haha. Thanks for taking a look at my critter. Monday is my first day so I'll see you then