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Snedgel
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Snedgel polycounter lvl 6
Hi , can you give me some advice to my work on devian art plz ?

here is my page : http://snedgel.deviantart.com/

i work on UDK

( sry but my english is very bad so i can't make long sentence :s )

Ty

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  • SuPa-
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    SuPa- polycounter lvl 11
    Hey Snedgel! The first thing I'd suggest is for you to have images posted directly in the thread rather than link to a DA page.

    I'm not an environment artist so forgive me if I'm not much help. I really like the colors and lighting so far right now, but the small details in the piece are coming off as noisy. Particularly the dirt texture on the ground. Also, the ground feels too flat right now, at least in my opinion. The tiles on the roof look pretty messy as well. There's a lot of stretching and the texture is coming across as plastic.
  • Snedgel
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    Snedgel polycounter lvl 6
    ok !!

    thanks :) i'm gonna put some pic directly on my post :)

    thank for your advice ;)
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