[WIP] Ran Yakumo -Critique please-

Jv the Wanderer

Hello. I'm pretty much modeling this For a while now. I would like to get tip or critique from this.





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I'm trying to go for something anime with normal and specular detail. I have seen Some games that went with anime style (Catherine for Example) but I haven't seen them with more realistic detail other than their diffuse (unless I didn't look hard enough.)

Ikosan

you've given her a much longer face and smaller eyes than in the anime which makes her look a bit masculin, I'd consider taking some of the edge loops that are orbiting the mouth/eyes out and using the polys you've saved to nail the shape of the eyes.

Tenchi

Polys look a little dense round the mouth, you could perhaps save a few here. I personally prefer the cute anime face with the doll eyes style. The rest of the model looks good ^^

Jv the Wanderer

I downloaded the shader production tutorial From Eat 3D, followed though with, and made some cool shaders with it. Since UDK has Material Function, I used it to so it wouldn't be disorganize. I also used the Material Instance Constant so I don't have to make the same material again for each of them.



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Jv the Wanderer

Ok I have her with Bones and morphs. The Model is pretty much done, but I still need To Rig her and figure out how to presenter her better.

I wonder how she will look if I get a APEX clothing on her. (If I get the addon).