Sketchbook: Sven the Red

Svelock

First post, my first real character project, it's name is Cerastes (which is by the way the name of a kind of viper) It's role is to gather soul for his master with his torsal mouth. For the need of a good presentation I used the Xoliul Shader 2 which is awesome and far more easy to use than the previous versions.

Feel free to comment or criticize

EmAr

The transition in the base of torsal mouth limbs could be a more organic one. Where the green skin comes and transitions into the white part, it looks as if the green skin is just added on. Something like the joining of teeth and gum could work better.

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Svelock

Thanks for the critique EmAr.

Well, my goal was to do a not-so-terrible creature because it's a schoolwork... I was asked to do a flying creature based on the concept of our end-year project.