Hanska's Sketchbook

Hanska

Hi all.

I'll be posting all my stuff here from now on. Dont know how active it'll be but I'll try.

Hope to get some good feedback so I can improve!
This seems like a great forum for that.

First off a Demon Head practice. Polypainted and sculpt in Zbrush and comp in PS:




Next is a crocodile ninja type of character. I was really inspired by this

I plan on doing a 10k tris version fully textured and normal mapped.
Highpoly soon done just need some cleaning up and some smaller details I guess.

Any suggestions and comments are very much appriciated!

IxenonI

Really nice characters. Are you planing on creating lowpoly game versions for any of these?

Good stuff...

Hanska

Hey thanks!

Yeah as I mentioned im planning on doing a 10k tris version of the Crocodile.

DMacDraws

Your croc guy is fantastic! I really love the expression, and how much you got out of that pinch in the snout. Gold!

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Hanska

Thanks guys.

TeriyakiStyle; I agree, I'll take a day or two and see what I can do with that. Thanks!

Daven

Really great stuff, but shouldn't a sketchbook thread be in the sketchbook section?

jeremiah_bigley

Hey good to see you over here on PC! Keep the stuff coming! Your crocodile reminded me of this...
http://www.zbrushcentral.com/showthread.php?t=088217

Looking forward to your lowpoly stuff

Hanska

suburbbum: Thanks! Sorry about that, didnt realize there was a different forum for that.

jeremiah_bigley: Hey man, thanks. I've seen some of your stuff lately, and you're rocking the lowpoly stuff man!


Okay I've done a very fast detail pass on the head again.

I think he looks a bit more badass like this, so I'll refine it more in this direction unless you guys got some awesome suggestions

[SF]Three9

So he looks fucking awesome, I would love to see him in a game...however, those scales on his head go the wrong direction. They should be vertical bumps, not horizontal :x

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Hanska

[SF]Three9: Hehe, good point. I might change it into more like that.. although I am going stylized with it, and people seem to think it is fine.

TeriykakiStyle: Haha, that's awesome. Looks kinda silly though, but I get your point. But at this point im ready to go with him as he is, but thanks a bunch for the input.

Havent gotten much done since last time but here's the turnaround.

VIDEO

Tigerfeet

More spikes! Love the crocodile! I especially love his anatomy. He's not a regular croc stood on two legs and stuffed in a diving suit, nor is he some weird human with a crocodile face. Everything just looks right.

This is just a personal frustration for me, so feel free to ignore it, but what's up with claws on the gloves? I've worn gloves that have fingernails attached and they're just obnoxious as all get out. What if he had fingerless gloves (and fingerless glove-boots)? I think it'd make the hands and feet look more interesting.

Hanska

Tigerfeet: Thanks for the reply and input. About the fingers and toes; I think it would loose the clean design im going for. I really appriciate the input and suggestion, though!

Here's the high poly done. Did go for a hardened skin type of style with the details. I like the hard feet, like it's his natural armor.

anyway, any comments or suggestions are appreciated, but I wont do any big changes to the model now. Gotta start on the lowpoly, or i'll never get this done!




high res 1
high res 2

jeremiah_bigley

Cool man! Get on that lowpoly! You got a color scheme in mind?

felipefrango

Love the silhouette on this guy, gotta subscribe to see how it turns out!

Neolight

Wonderful stuff in here. Can't wait to see more!

Jessica Dinh

That crocodile is awesome! Keep going

conte

that crocodile is very cool, original and fun!

Hanska

jeremiah_bigley; Thanks dude! Yeah, I'm thinking kind of darkish like a batman costume, but still more blueish and saturated. For the croc's skin I'm gonna try a couple of things. Maybe some purple would be cool.

felipefrango; Thanks man, yeah I've really worked alot on the silhouette

Neolight; thanks man, appriciate it

Jessica Dinh; Thanks, I will

conte; Thanks, I'm really glad you like it!

Sadly, no update. Working on that lowpoly!

Di$array

Oh i like this Nice clean design you have there man. How about adding a strape around the tail and have a couple of pouches on it.

Good luck and Keep us posted.

Hanska

Di$array: Strape around the tail? Hmmm... I dunno man. :P Thanks!

Working on the lowpoly, but needed a break. So did a render

LRoy

Fun stuff dude! I think the scales could be more protruding like the ones on the top of the tail.

Hanska

Hi again!

I've _finally_ gotten to do a pose, base texture and a render of my croc! Took forever to do low poly, but the result was worth it!
Still WiP. Can do alot more with the texture and spec map. And ofcourse he's lacking his swords

does the colors work?





Hope you like!

GabrielP

Oh man this is really great. Cant wait for more on him, lovin the syle.

refriedspinach

the colour scheme you chose is sweet, i also like how the first one kinda has the batman look to it

TaylorAnimated

Would LOVE to see this croc in a Ratchet and Clank style game. I imagine him being very springy

Hanska

Thanks guys!

TaylorAnimated: I'm so glad you said that! It's exactly the style I was going for! And I would love to work on a game like that!

Anyways.. got a suggestion to bring in more red color to the suit - to complement the green.

you dig?

Hanska

Heyy!



I'm finally done with this. Pretty pleased with the result.
All renders from Marmoset Toolbag, no image editing or brushups. (except for some minor BG stuff)

He's sitting at roughly 20k tris.
A 2k map used for the body textures, and a 2k map for Head, Sword and grenades.

Crits and comments are greatly appriciated!

RogerP

that looks awesome dude

TheQiwiMan

GORGEOUS! *drools*

mrBananas

Nicely done, man! Cool character

Makkon

How are you getting that lovely detailed fiber mesh look on such a small map!?

Conrad

great stuff love the texture you went with

Hanska

Appriciate the comments guys! Thanks.

Makkon: 2k map. It's not that small?

darkmag07

My only critique is that the croc's lower body kind of blends in with the background on your key shot. It might be worth trying to brighten up the background a little bit or to increase the size of the magenta spotlight.

The design is really awesome. It'd be great to see him rigged and animated to fight something with those two swords.

DWalker

The texture for the face seems a bit plain compared to the rest of the body. Crocodilians have a distinctive textured skin even away from the bony ridges. The white areas can also have darker green flecks, and the folds between the scales are often darker as well.


The snout reminds me of a gharial.

Hanska

Dwalker: Now That's a big image... I do agree with the critique though.

Darkmag07: Totally agree with it. So I totally went and did some adjustments




And a turntable!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cxl6R1MCII4&feature=youtu.be

Snacuum

It has a brilliant silhouette. Not just readable but easily uses the instant recognition symbols for 'ninja' and 'crocodile' I'd say.

Hanska

Trying my hand at some female anatomy.
Could really use some critique on this one, if anyone got the time. I'm going for beauty - So I hope she's allright so far!
Progress

Shiniku

Oh wow, great work! Very clean, beautiful, I think you really nailed it. If I had to nitpick I'd say the eye area looks a little off to me - a bit flat. It's hard to tell from this angle but it would be nice to see the round form of the eye emphasized a bit more.

Hanska

Shiniku: Thanks man! Appreciate it. I've implemented some changes to the eyes - will post her at a later time.

Needed a break from the girl, did this for the Art Jam.
Concept from Creature Box!