Sketchbook: Loginus

Loginus

Hi everyone,

I'm posting a few thing I made over last few months, feel free to criticize and express how much you dislike it . I will appreciate every constructive comment.

AsherOS

Nice work! for the four armed guy, I think you should blend the musculature of the arms into the body more, because it looks like they were just slapped onto the torso.

Gail_Blitzy

agreeded
you need to define the deltoid and pectoral muscles like you have for the top set!
I like your line drawing too, some nice detailing in there

System

For the 4 armed guy, id also lengthen his torso a bit just so it doesn't look like his second arms are coming out of the lower part of the rib cage. and i personally would make him have 4 pecs. but i seen people just make his pec muscles bigger. just play around with the muscle structure.

Hammed Al-Tamimi

Hello! Nice start! If I were you, I would increase the texture resolution (if possible) on the book. You might also want to check the scaling of the barrels in the scene, they seem slightly small, but it may just be the camera angle. I like the texturing you did on the scene itself.

Loginus

Very unfortunate that I didn't manage to spend enough time on my work last year, but there was enough to put together small demo with a few selected models that I liked the most so far. Hope to start posting regularly now, for now please comment, tell me what you might like and what you hate

My 2013 Demo