[Work In Progress] Environment Portfolio

NoctyQ

Hey guys. I've finally decided to get my portfolio up and 100% running now after some tragic months off hard labour and silent weeping while sweeping on isle five.

I've planed on doing three environment pieces:

• http://cghub.com/images/view/90593/
• Apothecary Exterior
• Random Sci-fi environment concept

I also plan on fleshing out, redesigning and optimizing my portfolio. But I'll get to that in time..

At the moment I've started blocking out one of the three environments I've decided to model.
Here's the concept:




Crits regarding proportions etc are very much appreciated! I've mostly just blocked in the bigger shapes and added some blocked out details. Update coming soon.

Gorman

The left wall appears to be leaning. Perhaps the divider is a bit too tall, especially the taller cap parts (although, that is probably just because this is blocking it out )

It looks good apart from that!

Lerr

I like the concept. Is it yours?
Good Luck with your folio.

Dismembered

I 2nd the divider being to tall. And that back, door?, seems a bit to wide. Everything else looks spot on to me.

Oisaca

I like it, it seems to have the potential of becoming something really nice. Keep updating frequently

NoctyQ

Thanks for the input guys!

I think I fixed the major proportional mistakes now and I also added some more objects:

Now I'll start working on making the major surface areas like floor and walls.

I've also worked some more on my portfolio for the first time in a while:

There's no huge changes except that I've made everything stretch and fill the whole divs. I have a lot more in mind but I'll probably start working on it a bit more when the pieces are done.

Highelf

Crits - I find the page to be very noisy and busy, you might want to organise it so there is more space on the screen, and make your images themselves read better (they're all very low on contrast, color toned to 1 mass) Make the objects pop more. Use consistent fonts (I see about 50000 different styles on the page) and get rid of the washed out images! Keep it clean and simple. Consider a simple front page scrolling page with large clear images, with small text-only buttons at the top. It's "boring" but it's professional and clean, easily navigatable! Hope this help

seir

I would be great to see that in modular pieces and placed all together in a game engine. But I guess it's too late