New to Polycount, seeking helpful feedback~

Raitoningu

Hi everyone. I'm brand new to polycount and am looking for some feedback on my Zbrush sculpt. It's for a university project, and it's to turn my own head into that of a zombie. Booo. I'm not very good at Zbrush so I'm here for some feedback that will help me improve my work. Thanks in advance!

Raitoningu

Thread is falling back into the murky sea. May I have some feedback please?

Many thanks!

makecg

ahmm.. what do I say.. you need alot of work in alot of areas. use reference.. lose the shit on the face for now.

Raitoningu

@makecg - I have been using reference. Could you be more specific about 'the shit' on the face?

Thanks.

makecg

The scars and the dent in the forehead. you need to get more 'facial structure' before attempting to do small details like this. pay more close attention to your reference.. all I can say is keep going.

Barbarian

He's referring to the scratches and indentation.

Can you post your reference? There are issues. Take another look at the ears, nose, and mouth, for ex.

Raitoningu

@makecg - I'll see what I can do, then.

Thanks.

Raitoningu

@ Barbarian - Yep, the ears are incomplete, and I haven't tackled the back of the head yet. References are on my computer at home I'll try and get them up in the morning.

Thanks!

makecg

I think you need to study alot more facial anatomy. - maybe try sculpting individual body parts - nose / ears just to see how they are..

keep it up man !

Raitoningu

@ makecg - Thanks very much for the tips, I'll have a go at some individual sculpts now and post them up later on today.