Brink bust WIP

Mrandk

Hey errybody! I am currently student at fullsail and have been lurking for a long time here. Finally grew a spine and figured it was about time I made a thread. I really, really loved the style of the characters in Brink so I figured I'd try my hand at one. Still needs a lot of love atm, the forehead, neck/shoulders, and ears are all jacked up and the obvious lack of eyes and teeth are even more disturbing. Was bored today so I slapped on some sloppy colors. Heres where I'm at right meow.



Hopefully will finish this up in a couple days, Critiques much appreciated!

shawnell3d

your close so close but i really dont know whats off compared to the brink style of characters. i think their chracters are more exaggerated. this will be a great piece i like what i see keep it up!

Dylan Brady

yeah wheres the Exagerated Jaw!

Also, spend a bit more time on his expression, the curling of his upper lip doesnt look right. the levator muscles pull on the whole upper part of the lip, so you have a more round shape IE:

Roepetoepa

Looks good man Like the wrinkles and he skintones

Mrandk

Hey sorry its taken me so long to reply, another project has been eating up a bunch of time. Anyways enough with the excuses, les get down to business.

@Bonebrew22 & shawnell3d : Thanks for the critiques! I messed around with the lips to make em more round and not all flat and fish lippy. Also I stormed the webs for a scowl with lips that were close to what i was looking for. I found one courtesy of the king of scowls himself the ol' Dick Cheney!


Also now with 30% more jaw!
(lemme know if there's anything else!)



Now to put some teef in that sloppy hole I call a mouth. There's so much more to do to this guy before I can call it done!

motenai

I think it's going in the right direction...the likness with a Brink character is very visible...i don't know about the expression, i think it's a little too exagerated, it seems like he receive a big punch from his right side...
Nice skin tones too

Drakon

Nice! Liking the mouth, stallone ish, or maybe he's got an invisible cigar in it?

Jeff Parrott

Real nice style! Definitely could use some exaggeration.

Tim's work is was more stylized and over the top with expression. http://badpolygon.com

But you're on a really impressive path. Just keep at it.

Polygoblin

Glad to see another Full Sailer The bust looks really good so far! Keep it up

Mrandk

Thanks for all the feedback guys it has been really helpful!

@ Motenal you were right, the lips were twisted too much so it was giving a freaky inviso-punch look to him, i twisted them back the right way and pulled back some of the cringe

@ jeffro Thanks for the link man! it was really helpful, i pulled his jaw around to exaggerate it more and pushed around his cheeks



stuff i still gadda do:
neck detail
shirt shirt shirt
materials for eyes and teeth
texture polish

if you guys see anything else lemme know!