Vehicle-WIP

rickjragon

Here's a concept vehicle I'm working on. Looking to add some more props and any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Brendan

OK, so you've got a seat, so presumably a person can ride/drive it.

Make a rough person shape, with correct proportions, and sit him in the seat. Where do his hands and legs go? If you want to drive it in a game, how would the player do it - a wheel is commonly used for steering, but it's not the only way. But there should be some way for the character's movements to change the steering of the car. Same with the gas and the brakes.

Talking of steering, from the look of it, there's not enough room for the wheels to turn left and right. Having the front wheels turn (looks like the back ones are on a solid axle), can help the vehicle look like it 'works'.

rickjragon

Great advice! I decided to put a biped in the seat and it really helped me rearrange the levers and give me a better idea of where to put the pedals.

polygonfreak

You have some wonky geo on the box where the driver is facing. I would add some spikes to the front to compliment the spikes in the rear.

rickjragon

I reworded the front and added some details. Looks more menacing this way.

Cooljay

I would check out some reference of hot rods, and drag racing cars. This seems off and some things seem over smoothed.

rickjragon

rickjragon

I added the spikes on the front and fixed the weirdness on the inside, it was just missing some support edges.