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Hot Alien Chick {WIP}

Most recent work in progress of an original character I've come up with.WIPALIEN.jpg

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  • uncle
    IMO widen hips and head.

    Also hard to judge detail due to low res and contrast...
  • Brytryne
    Arms seem a bit too long, might be intended though?
  • XXXTHECHAD
    Yeah I wanted the arms longer and a little more heavy looking.
  • jmt
    The thread is titled "Hot Alien Chick", but she doesn't seem that hot to me. She has long arms, little hips, broad shoulders, and a long, flat fish-like face.

    I can't really judge more than the overall proportions from these images, but it seems like the non-human modifications have been done randomly, without a concise concept.

    There's tons of reference out there for this sort of character: Star Wars, Mass Effect etc.

    Are you working from a concept?
    Are you going to texture this?
  • XXXTHECHAD
    Yeah I drew up a concept, but it has changed a lot since I started. I am planning to texture it as well.
  • greevar
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    Shorten the arms. The wrists should align with the groin.

    The navel and hips are too low. The navel should be about 3 head lengths down.

    The knees should be wider. As should the head, but I think it needs to be rounded out. Right now, it looks like a flattened oval.

    If the arms are going to be long, I would suggest you increase length of the arms more and the size of the hands to indicate that they are longer for a reason. Fins on the legs by the ankles would help sell this too. I'm assuming this an aquatic character.
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