Lets smoke Hookah

minimari

lighting needs work, and i still have to fix some things but I am almost to what I think i can call done. Crits please Thanks

mystichobo

hmmm, looks like a good start, maybe a bit clean though?

Also, could do with some sort of border where the cut out in the rear wall is, it just looks a bit weird there, and would add a bit more visual interest.

Cheers,
Hobo

jeremiah_bigley

All the pillows look photoshopped in? You have this weird haloing effect going on around some of the props like it was a bad composite.
And the pillow in the middle (right behind the hooka bong) is going through the little dip on the floor. Also you might knock back the self-illumination on the 2 windows... they pop a bit too much.

Lastly I don't know if this is realtime or not... But you could use some ambient occlusion to help ground some things. Whether that is a pass or baking it in... You stuff just needs some contrast/pop to make it more interesting.

Hope that helps

uncle

Too dark fosho, check image histogram.

sprunghunt

it needs some drapes on the walls. Some curtains and so on.

this sort of thing:

minimari

sprunghunt: I definitely agree, thanks for that reference! It helps a lot!

Jeremiah: LOL no they arent photoshoped in but yeah I will have to see where I get that ambient occlusion in UDK.

mystichobo: Totally agree, I think once I add curtains, and fix lighting it'll be better!

Thanks guys! I appreciate it!!