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WIP GreenHouse

Here is my model so far for a green house I am making. I haven't created vegetation for it yet, I want to nail the the building down first. I am still adding a few more props and broken glass in, and I am open to any suggestions or ideas you guys may have.

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Josh

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  • Rick_D
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    Rick_D polycounter lvl 12
    it looks like a greenhouse built into an attic, which is a great idea for a scene.

    but right now i think everything is a little off scale, everything is too thick. look at the size of the door, and think about how much metal is being used to make fairly basic support beams and window frames.

    other than that i like the idea, don't make everything so straight, batter some edges around and deform a few supports.

    I would also suggest that you spend more polies in the circular fan, there is no reason in modern game engines to have something so large as blocky as it is.

    keep it up :)
  • JBelay
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    thanks for the suggestions, I am putting them into effect. Does anyone have an idea what a reasonable texture space for a scene like this would be? 3x2048?
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