Urban ''megaman'' like WIP

Fred2303

Hi everybody! im new to polycount and pretty new to the 3D world too! i wanted to share my first character that i am doing right now at school and would like to have constructive comments so there it is.
this is the lowpoly version 6500poly

thank you!!

Fred2303

http://img854.imageshack.us/i/renderlowpoly10.jpg/
http://img851.imageshack.us/i/renderlowpoly11.jpg/

Visceral

your image links seem to be broken. let me try.

MeintevdS

Hehe you guys are trying to embed the image viewer not the actual image.




there you go

First crit would be, waste less space in your renders. People don't wanna scroll to see the complete image. All the white space on the left and the right can be cut off.

The proportions of your model seem a bit off. I'm not talking about the huge feet of course, but a good example are the length of the legs compared to the length of the torso. It might be an idea to look into anatomy when you start your next sculpt.
Even if the character wears clothes it's important that at least the rough shapes of the body are in place. After this you'll be able to just hang the clothes off the body and it'll look a lot more natural.

But you've got a nice start, I'd suggest showing your high poly and low poly prior to baking though, that way people will be able to critique them sooner. If you were to adjust you sculpt now it would mean you'd have to revisit both the lowpoly and it's uvs. Just something to keep in mind for your next model

Looking forward to seeing it textured.
Welcome to polycount, keep up the good work!

Fred2303

thanks for the images!pretty much the first time i use a forum too heheh. for the legs the thing is that he's wearing some large and loose pants and i put them little bit bellow his hips. i will post the base anatomy that i did and use as long as highpoly stuff that i have in a couple of hours
thanks for the comments

MeintevdS

Ah yes that explains it a lot more Those pants actually confuse me in real life sometimes

Fred2303

hahahaha true!

Fred2303

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Fred2303

Heres for the highpoly!

Fred2303

Fred2303

here are some rough colors that i decided, at first i decideo to keep the megaman palet of color for the armor and guns . any advices or comments !? im not sure about the color of jeans and shirt and the buckle...[IMG][/img] Uploaded with ImageShack.us
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Fred2303

and tell me if you dont understand what im writing , english is not my mother tongue hehe

Cooljay

Interesting take on Megaman. Overall I'd say that you could start painting more complicated tones, and variations to achieve a nice suttle visual experience.