WIP Jeep

Polyjon

This is my first time posting here! This is a Jeep I am working on for one of my classes, I've modeled out the Low poly for it and this is my High poly WIP, I figured I'd post it and get some feedback! sooo... here it is! Ignore the gas can! that will be separate!

graylen

It looks like a good start, what really stands out for me is the wheels. They don't look right. You should add the separation between the metal part and the rubber part (have no idea what they are called in English sorry!)
something like this

Polyjon

Thanks! I was going for something along the lines of this right here though! I'll look into that though

Dylan Brady

Im hunchin that your wheels are gonna look like dis"

Also Graylens right about your tires needing geometry for where the rims overlap the tire

graylen

Even if you go for that type of wheel you still need some hard surface to separate the metal and the rubber. It looks like your missing the hard metal ring that ends the metal part and hold the rubber in place. (I hope that makes sense).

Polyjon

Yeah I see what you're saying. I will work on getting those ironed out

KennyTies

I would say your off to a good start. But one thing that stands out to me is the front wheel cover looks like it has some smoothing issues or it just might need some more edge loops.

butt_sahib

Yeah that front cover has some smoothing issues.
Show us a wireframe

Great job looking forward to updates!